I like your 3d work. I suck in 3d, so I can't say anything constructive +9/9

Never done 3D like this before, so like Pawlack, can't say anything constructive. Very nice work.

--Edit--

Realised my crit was VERY flawed...

Nice! very girly! love the coffee cup!!!

Awww Barbie is gonna love her new house Well done, I aint got a clue about 3D.

EDIT* just noticed your own picture on the wall and the accurate reflection in the mirror.Very good.

Like Andy i don´t know nothing ab out 3D. But I find this charming.
+10
)))))
Bea

LOL Skye! Like everyone else above, I don't do CG neither, so I cant really crit. But I do know a nice piece of work when I see it! Very feminine. Very you
Nice all round finish to it from an excellent angle.

Well done +10
Hugs, Xris

EDIT: Just been looking it over again and have been admiring the lighting and ambient detail. Nice.....

Seems like a lot of work, very pretty
Good one, you're doing a great job on details, and they make all the difference...

i don't know jack about 3d work, but i know what my eye likes, and i like this...and its because of the pinks, GREAT COLOR RELATIONSHIPS +9

This is really nice, the colour scheme is very well done as is the layout. I can't offer much in the way of crits as I don't know 3D, well done.

omigod~ It looks like my room! but 100000 x less messier. I am in love with it! The only thing that seemed a tag odd is the lighting of the lamp on the right, and that strange light between the back of the bed and the curtain. but that's only minor detail. Overall, very very good! 7/7

I like it. It reminds me of a doll house. The colors and composition are attractive. My only crit is the noise. Perhaps try running this through Neat Image for a cleaner presentation.

Good work Skye.

Michelle

i like this work .... +9

but couterpane must be softer increas the seams

oh sorry not seams , increase the objet resolution....

I Don't know much about 3d but have worked on 3d studio max and I know how much it takes to do such work. Its a very good work and for a beginner its really very good.

I think you need to work on materials (textures) and fabrics.
Fabrics (curtain or bedsheet) lacks the flow of fabric.
I did not like the window.
Lighting is okay.

Yay! Finally a 3d work from you !
Very full of details and objects. How much time you spent to model that?

I have something to say about picture format, you saved that .gif...wich give all that "grainy" feel wich is not the best result for a high resolution image. I'm sure that if you save that .jpg this will be really a lot sharper.
For the rest seems all ok i would have added some bevel to the bedside tables cause that way they would catch more highlights and they seems lees "blocky". Textures are awesome, the bed sheet seem a little stiff but ok. I'm a little confused on the light though, cause it's evening ...and the sky is orange, but the light color and intensity from the window does'nt match that ... it seems morning... anyway it's almost always better to add sky in compositing and not on the rendering ( i cannot tell this for the grainy i've told before so sorry if you already did that)

Maybe it's a little 'girlish' for me but i love that. Can't wait to see new renders.

Powernemo, youre right, i had to save it as a gif because a .jpg kept being too big. and as for the sky..i think i should tilt the enviroment sphere a bit more to the lighter side.

and as for the textures, i'll be sure to add it into my next renders. Thnx guys for all your crits and comments so far. im taking serious notes down here to improve my next renders.

I don't understand much in 3d but
1.I like pink
2.I think it's kinda dreamy lovely bedroom my room would never become...
Comon! Where is the mess?!!At least a few socks thrown on the bed?
9+
PS.I've replyed to your comment if you're interested, thank you

Glad to see ur 3D work !
im dont know much about 3D but i feel u should work more on texture/material. or maybe u wanted this kinda plastic feel. that bedsheet looks too odd to me..it has feel of paper rather than cloth. pls correct me if im wrong. what can i say more than this....keep up the spirit
I like the colour scheme

Well I think you've pretty much had a go at every catergory available by now. Very impressed with your 3d. Not the kind of room I would want to sleep in but I guess thats not the point anyways Very nicely rendered!

Great , I see you even have your art work there.
+10

nice work there missy!! i love the colours used! i agree with MsMichelleLynn about the noise. also, i would like to know how long the modeling took you, since time is quite factor. anyway... you did a good job!

Later!

Awe cool, you do 3d too and so well. Very impressive stuff

the model built in a day, the render time took around 20 minutes.way too long i think...
and yeah, i used my own art in the picture frames...hey, its continuity

but really, thnx for all your crits people, its helping a helluva lot.

Uwaaw! Cute! Why shudder?

Mirror looks weird, maybe you should make it taller. But I have one dresser like that anyway...

The pillow it's not so soft for sleeping, It's not my style but it's ok. Better like art on the walls. +5

Hi skye, got here abit late.. pucka modelling and texturing! very cute, is it a replica of your room? about the time of day, is it dawn/ dusk. because the light from the window is very sharp like noon. Good work chica.

thats awesome!!!

great job +10

Well, its an ok render but you need to focus more on your light. Dont know if you used any GI but thats pretty vital when you are doing indoor lightning.

I must say that iam pretty shocked that you´ve got 220 points for this image. People like Cheng Feng can barely scrape 100 points togehter, and iam sorry to say but his pictures are on another level. I think thats the big problem with this community, great artist dont always get the credit that they are supposed to be getting.

Dont take this as an insult, your picture is fine but still needs alot of work. Light, modelling, scale size, textures and the render all could use some more work.

Cheers...

this is so cute!

i love the pillows the best... i wish it could be somehow animated. The only thing that is bothering me is the sky outside... it doesnt seem to match the light entering the room... i'm digging it though.. groovilicious baby...

+highest marks

nicely done nice childish atmosphere... nice modeling skills.

Nice job over all but there are 2 thing that I see wrong with it. Both, I think were mentioned already.

1) The outside "outside weather" doesn’t match the inside lighting. I see that you are using Mental Ray in Maya there is an option in the Render Globals (render settings) called "Image Based Lighting” to get to that option go to Render in: Mental Ray > click the mental ray tab > then it is about the 12th "arrow" down on the list > click the "create" button. Once the Attribute editor opens you can assign the "outside weather" picture to the "image name" option. Then tweak the rest of the setting until you reach your desired effect.

2) The picture quality is to grainy to really critique or comment on anything else. If you are using Photoshop try using the "Save For Web..." feature under the File menu. You should be able to use a .png or .jpg file with a low file size and a high picture quality.

Other than those two comments It think it a nice scene. Nice modeling job too. Did you use NURBs or Polys?

Oh yeah one more thing. I don't know if you were wanted those pictures to be framed in glass or not, but if you were you cold use a Phong or PhongE material and tweak the reflectivity property to give it a fake glass look

Well I hope this incredibly long post helps out some.

-Maser

Awesome .... and yes very girly
9/9

The First image I view and it is another South African! nice!

Actually, the grainy feel makes me remember all those old cg bits on games, you even send secret messages through your art!

Really nice work

The room has got a very good atmosphere, and the pink colour actually works. Good idea with your own drawing there, on the wall...
+9

And so, I know Skye will not be able to read this, but I think it's a shame to let it all stop here. I leave my comment, as I had not seen this pic before now. Good work.

The room has got a very good atmosphere, and the pink colour actually works. Good idea with your own drawing there, on the wall...
+9

And so, I know Skye will not be able to read this, but I think it's a shame to let it all stop here. I leave my comment, as I had not seen this pic before now. Good work.

We'll miss you.

Very cool and very girlie 9/9

This artwork now has the most impact emotionally on me. A pretty room in the setting sun with no one around to be seen.

We will all miss you very much, Skye.

awesome work Taintra!!!

Rest in Peace

Great work full of detail! +10

RIP

Maybe somewhere you are looking down on us! n realizing how wonderful you were to touch us…virtually. Maybe you are there, somewhere where you have your own set of people to depend on…I only hope you are in better place than here…from this earth.
God bless…we all miss you here…dear! May be somewhere you are reading this…I hope you are…Rest in Peace! Miss ya!

awesome! my sister likes it so much! lol!

i love it !!! actually i love all your artworks! modeling is very well done andi am sure with better rendered it would look even better